It could be pretty good. Work on the movements of the characters... & I don't see how the music really goes along with it. Some dialog would probably be good... Play the music as they're fighting, And make the fighting more actionpacked... Too much standing around during it. 2/5.
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It's fuckin' weird, that's what I think. It was more interresting, at least to me, in the beginning, before the characters started to really fight. It felt more symbolic and artistic there. Afterward it just got weirder and weirder. Still a good flash though. Good length, graphics could use work, unless you want to claim that it's a stylistic choice.
I don't think the music goes along with the flash very well kinda ruins it for me.