here are some prealoader guides
here are some prealoder guides, i hope they can help =)
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /39399
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /48589
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Midnight Fireworks 1.1
Hi there!
This is my first flash movie, not that it is much of one; but it did take me a few hours to make due to the fact that I suck so far.
Hopefully you can enjoy its simplicity, it puts a smile on my face at least.
Positive feedback/advice is very much welcome.
Thank you for taking the time to view my entry.
Changes:
-Added music
-Removed black line on moon, and added action
A big thanks to SupraAddict for his advice! He was very helpful.
Killafan777 responds:
Thank you I needed one of those. :)
Great job on your work
I see the improvement, along with one of my favorite songs :3
If you want to take it to another level, you could blur the moon a little, and give parts of the building a red or blue shade, depending on which kind of fireworks appear.
But, all in all, great job,and I'm glad I helped :)
8/10
Killafan777 responds:
Thanks, I'm thinking about adding more stuff such as the preloader, more fireworks with different effects, maybe make the moon look more relistic with texturing, etc.
It's going to be sparkling by the time im done. I hope :P
Not bad
Nice one
one point of attention , take more collors of firework gets boring to watch fast
music is nice loved the flash in general , first work you say? very nice start!
Killafan777 responds:
Thank you very much!
I will make sure to draw up some more fireworks as well as giving them more effects.
Yes, it is my first flash; and I have to say I'm semi-proud of it.
And I'll be even prouder when I make some more changes. :P
Thanks again! :)
Um...
So, no preloader eh. Just to let you know, When your wait around for the animation to begin but have no idea on progress, you tend to get antsy. And scaring the sh&@ out of your viewer with intensly loud music when it does abrubtly start is not good either.
Knowing its a first, I'll tell you that you did well, but this seems more like practice than a real animation. Sorry.
Killafan777 responds:
Thank you for your response.
I will make sure to learn how to use a pre-loader and edit it, and as well maybe try to fade the music in if possible.
Thanks again! :)
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