Trying to imitate Rare Ware huh?

5 minutes!!! Us viewers on newgrounds ain't here to be stuffed around with!
I mean, I'm happy that you chose Link and Navi for your flash ,(because I'm a big fan of the Legend of Zelda series) but you need to stop thinking that weir going to waste our valueable time on your TEST RUNS!
P.S Don't ever call your computer baby....ever again!

im giving u a ten because...

because everyone deserves a 10 on their first try. I hate people who "I don't like it"
"You suck" "No. Try harder"
By the way, it was a pretty good flash for a beginner. :)

Not bad for your first

Not bad for your first, but you needto turn the voices WAY up.
Also on another note, try making your flashes a bit longer.

nice

for a test run, you did prety well. ive definatly seen worse.

pretty good!

great job with your voice acting and style-but, in the future, don't state that it is your first flash-some newgroundsers take that as a bad aspect and hit the "blam button" so to speak. which will definitely diminish your deserved score unfairly-happened to me a while back. but great job, you definitely have potential.

My suggestion to improve is to add some actionscript, like make a square, or whatever, and selct it, press "F8" and make it into a button.
then put in the code

on(release)
{
gotoAndStop(1);
}

this will make a re-play button at the end of your flash-essential really.
and you might want to stop your flash instead of having it loop- use this on your last frame

stop();

hope I helped