Prettt Good
it was alright i thought that the animation wasnt that great but it had a good storyline and poses. Some of the sound effects d\were not really neccesary. Great start work a LITTLE harder
Author Comments
i really don't know what to expect of this one i personally think its good but i'll leave that up to you. does any one know if you can tween animation to make it look in real-time movement if so please tell me so i can improve this sh$% i am going to redo this so in a month expect a 4/5 material flash
LeoK responds:
I know that's you ZaBoy a.k.a. ZAVIER
need more work
i think you need to put a little more time and effort into this. the poses were cool, but the animation was lacking allot. also, it seemed to slow.
needs work
I guess the story made sense a little. The animation was choppy and inconsistent. What was with the random audio bits? It was all too random for me. Keep audio consistent and maybe put some music in the background...or put somekind of audio so the audio bits dont seem so random.
summary
im giving you a 5/10 cause the animation wasnt really the best (i guess you know that) actually there were more still images than animation, but youre well focused, maybe you will receive some unfair harsh reviews, but just keep trying, its the only way you can get better.