Its an ad an no one wants to here it.
PS: this was meant for the commericials/ad collab, but it got locked so i decided to put it on the portal by itself.
PSS: the background is kinda messed up.
Bah...
Okay, I'll be blunt: It was awful. It's something I would expect as somebody's first submission. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that you should give up. One thing I suggest would be to improve your overall art style, either on paper or using Flash. Then, once you think it's improved, practice animating. Don't give up!
~Keep practicing,
Fleggin
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It's OK, I notived that on you Newgrounds Page that you're not "The Best" flash animator on newgrounds, but I hope yuo keep improving and learning your way. In the scheme of things, even with the stuff that is posted here, I found this to be "Below Satisfactory", and giving it a 2/10 and a 2/5.