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A quick flash movie I thought I would share to the world. This was originally an assignment for school, I had a couple of weeks to do it. This is my first flash movie I've created, so it isn't the greatest. Hopefully I could get some constructive feedback. (BTW, the storyline is totally random...)

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Ahahahahaa

That was awesome!

Random !

that was ... special

it could of been a little faster, but I liked the completely random story

was it worthwhile making?

one of the worst flashes i have ever seen! the animation, ok. storyline extremly short and quite pathetic. humour, i just didnt find it funny i thought it was too slow. if you sped it up and spent a little more time no it it might have been betetr. also the smoothness of the scenes with the queens another one bites the dust music isnt well timed, could definately be better!

Frickin awesome

LOL. Bugs Bunny Music, and u ppl hating the flash, poop u. Cause this guy can animate better than I can and I made 3 flashes.

Beginner?

Speed it up a bit, add some more sound effects, and shorten the unimportant parts, for example, the beginning scene where they guy is walking. People lose interest when they have to sit thru a minute of nothing. Also, work on your facial expressons. Fast food guy could use a little help.

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Votes
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Score
3.65 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 15, 2008
10:44 AM EST