Needs a lot of improvement
Way too fast, and it looks just... bleh.
The sticks' movement are too unnatural and bumpy. Try making the brush tool smoother and use more physics in them. Also reduce the FPS rate.
Author Comments
Well I made A stick move when I was 11 and Since it is one of my first I want to show it to NG. But since it wouldn't make it on its own i made a new stick movie to go with it. Vote Fairly.
"Note" Since my new stick flash is 24 fps and the old one was 12 it is now 24 as well so sorry for the old one being so fast thats why I didn't add sound to the old one.
"Update" Oh thanks for the thumb!
mako-mage responds:
no offense but read the author comments before you say something stupid :P
uh...
they were too fast, not enough killing and the music wasn't the best choice. try again lol
nice improvement
nice improvement, but i guess you only had one way to go from the first lolz
mako-mage responds:
ya I don't enjoy making stick films too much
sorry
really sorry, but this animation just isn't up to scratch, but i'll give you some pointer, if you wonna use stickmen use the 3D stickmen, give them eyes and mouths, if you want you can add hair too. get a couple of clos ups on the characters, like intro's and stuff. mainly put much more time into it, and make it alittle more even, it looks like a rushed job, and there's not much good in that. i'm a good stickmen fan, but you need to add some more and better stuff. you should get much better results if you take note to what i've said.
thanks for reading.
mako-mage responds:
I read oh i read, well ty for the review anyway
good
yeah its pretty decent the old one is too fast though unfortunatly...
still good make some more XD XD XD
Gimme a Bannana Gimme a Bannana Gimme a Bannana Gimme a Bannana
mako-mage responds:
Ty For the good review
Banana?
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