weird and annoying
Isn't fun, isn't scary, don't have good graphics...
It was nothing at all, but I will try to help you:
First, you need a better idea, it isn't so hard to find one better, just think in any and it will be better then this one.
Second, don't make big ballons written with the words that you will talk, make subtitles istead ( I hope that you will understand that, i'm from Brazil ^^)
Third, the talking head is like the final boss in Doom 2, does it have any relation?