Here's some tips...
Framerate to 33 fps. Why are the heads sticking out of the chest? Use layers if ur not.
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yes this a preview so if you dont like them dont vote on it. its about hank attacking a 1337 bace and meeting a geust star. to make it clear its a guy named tom.
Absolutely terrible.
1.) Crank up the FPS.
Madness runs the best on 30 frames per second, as the default 12, or whatever your currently running makes the animation run slow. The current frame rate on the animation is so slow, that it could bore a person in mere seconds or minutes.
2.) Walking.
Your current walking is sad. The foot lifts up and moves about a centimeter (or more) away from the current position, and then you drop it. Then, you move the back foot forward so it passes the foot in-front. The body here is moved along with the back foot.
3.) Deaths.
In Madness, they don't die with their feet going flat, it makes it look weird. The feet still same the same when they're walking and when they die.
4.) Spelling.
You are probably one of the worst spellers I've ever seen. Google up and download Firefox, then use that from now on. With firefox, you shouldn't be able to make that many typos as you do now. Also, if you're concerned about a word's spelling, be sure to google it first. If you spelt it wrong, the correct spelling should appear in a link.
5.) Practice.
You should practice more in your spare time animating. Eventually, you'll be able to make an animation way better then this, so why not start now? Only two more episodes until Madness is pretty much out of the hype.
6.) Positioning.
Hank's head isn't placed on right. It's too low, and too much to the left. You should always try to keep the head in the one place.
7.) Sprites.
I don't get it. You combined Madness Combat Antipathy, Consternation and Inundation sprites with Apotheosis sprites. Why not keep to one sprite selection? MC 6, 7, and 8 have the front view of the three fingers in the sheets, unless you never got them.
Also, could your characters be more original? You never drew anything at all (those edited posters don't count, either) so it's pretty much just a burger without the meat. Practice sprite creation! Even I had no idea what to do at first, but I figured out how to draw them later.
Keep trying.
hankjwebaltin responds:
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yaa better
i have to admit its alot better than that insanity thing or whatever but dude turn the fps up it will probaly take longer to finnish but the longer the better the animation is
only thing good was the preloader
everything else wasent even worth watching
hankjwebaltin responds:
go to hell
why hank head is on his belly?
huh?