good, but could use some work.
i don't do reviews much, i'm working on a system to make them easier on my head. this, however, i felt like i really needed to review. i just finished watching all the previous episodes and here's what i have to say:
1. your art work and music interpretation couldn't be better. i love the way everything seems to fit, although i bet that you find music and put a sequal to the story bent towards it :P. i'd personally watch these just for that: the art and the way the music just fits. the theme of the music fits, but the rhythm feels off. as a suggestion, maybe you could throw in some rhythm syncronization with the animationfor the next episode.
2. the story. it is definitely there, but as i said above i think you're just making it up as you go along. not that that's a bad thing, but it makes the series as a whole feel kinda choppy, especially without any of the stuff between episodes.
3. finally, the individual animations. i feel that if you put enough effort into it, the looping could be alot smoother and nicer, more watcher-friendly. i personally had trouble with the fact that it suddenly skipped back to the beginning. although it's a perfect indication of when the whole thing is done, i think it makes the animation feel less... umm, well, rounded. i don't mind the skip back to the beggining bit, but maybe you could make it a little less violent in the future (i recall that in one episode the animation skipped back to the start during the music, that, for example, could be done without)
sorry if this is too long or if i seem like i'm nagging, but i really think this could go alot further with a little more work. as in full movie further. your style is admirable and awesome, and you can tell that this is good quality animation, but with a little more work you could easily kick up the rating from 3 to 5.
or you could not listen at all to what i have to say. i definitely can't do this kind of stuff (even if i HAD flash yet >.<) and i feel like this art is godly. compared to me. otherwise:
GO QWERTY GO! BEAT THAT ROBOT! WOOT! DO... WHATEVER IT IS YOU'RE DOING!
