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I think what bothers me most about this is the fact that the physics are so unrealistic in this. The whole staircase not falling over with no supports just bothers me. In terms of the quality of the movie, this was pretty bad overall. Animations were quite elementary and the storyline was predictable if anything.
it was very nice
its a short flash animation but it shows your potential hope u do more and bigger!
Good concept and interesting style shows potential
The idea was great, and shows potential for your next submission. I also like your character and text style, which will look brilliant when fleshed out more.
Good work, I look forward to your next piece!
It's okay for a short
Cute and short, but too short. I think you should continue this basic theme but make it longer and more characters, it seems a little Madness-esque. There was alot of the frame area you did nothing with, maybe a little more movement would be good in the next one too. Sound effects were good and well timed.
lol, Sound effect. Singular. I thought of adding a background, but then i remembered i had to make one so...
anyway good ideas
did not like it. It didn't really make sense to me.
Thanks for your review,
I didn't use much of my time, this is a 4 hour effort, so it isn't supose to make sense. It was suposed to see if peolle like the animation.
Anyway, i apreciate your sincerity,
I might do something better when the school tests finish.