Not bad...
....but not something to call your buds about either. You definitely have talent though.
Author Comments
I made the audio for this cartoon when I was dating a girl who loved Harry Potter more than anything, the audio is kind of old so sorry about the static in some parts, I did all I could to optimise it. Its just the fact that at the time I was using an old microphone.
Anyways enjoy!... or else...
yarvenclog responds:
I dont know what you're talking about, I tell everyone I know to go watch my flashes. But anyways thanks for your review.
Found it rather odd
I'd have to say that while the character looks were alright, the low similar voices and few good jokes kind of put dirt on this movie.
Magneto's cameo seemed rather funny though. Though I'm sure the girl who you made it for was quite offended at the naked black guy. And if not, well lucky you.
Anywho, alright job. Only real improvement that should be made is the sound.
yarvenclog responds:
The voice acting is a recurring problem that I really need to work on. But I never actually made it for a girl, because we broke up a long time ago, but Im thinking that I just might send the movie to her just to see how offended she gets.
Yikes
Well, it had a lot of promise, but the voice acting was really bad. it kind of killed the whole thing.
Also it was without sound FX in a lot of places it seemed there should have been some.
You had a couple good jokes and some flat ones. Overall it was a good movie. The graphics were pretty good for sure.
Keep it up, just try getting some more SFX in your Flash so it doesn't seem like dead silence when action is taking place (yes I know there was BGM, but that doesn't replace SFX).
yarvenclog responds:
Well the audio was made last year during the summer, and at the time I have had very limited resources, but since then I have gotten more and better equipment for doing things like sound effects. And I have been told a thousand times that I need better voice acting, and Im working on it...
cool
I liked it. The animation and the voices were pretty good...although there was a lil static at one point. I loved how Snape died haha
yarvenclog responds:
yeah, thats how snape really died, not like those lies you hear in the "book".
Thanks for your input.
Did u steal that giant gay black guy from me? lol
Pretty funny I s'pose, and the drawings were pretty clean though there wasn't much animation so it's good in my book. You sounded completely fake as the black dude though heh. And I'm guessing you may have seen one of my NightGun movies, there's a character VERY similar to him on there. If not, still good job. ;)
yarvenclog responds:
Wow, I just went and watched your nightgun movie, and there is a HUGE similarity, crazy... Also the reason he sounds so lame is because I made the audio a full year before I started really getting into flash, I have a lot better resources now. Thanks for the review.
