Lets see...
It could have had more. You could also make the text appear automatically. No need to make a trailer just finish the whole thing and submit it.
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This is a trailer, not an episode. Don't watch if you don't like sprites, because you're just wasting your time. Also do not expect action! The first episode will have action, not the trailer. This is just so you can get a little bit of story. Also I'm still learning sprites ( Have only made 2 flashes) so don't expect me to transform into Alvin-Earthworm. That's it, so enjoy.
gunnchief responds:
Through poll, people prefer pressing the button instead of text going automatically. Also it allows users to go at whatever reading speed they please (A lot of users think auto is too slow, or think it's too fast).
The plot's too familiar
Not bad with the sprites. You deffinately know how to use them well. Your story idea isn't bad, but it's too much related to the Sonic Battle game. I mean, sure, it's your own ideas for the fact this robot is going to be the "ultimate weapon," and that it doesn't want to live for its purpose as much, but that's sorta how Sonic Battle goes: a 5,000 year old robot, known as "Emerl" from Sonic & pals, whom was originally built to destroy by obtaining all the Chaos Emeralds (which Emerl craves for) decides to live differently. Like I said, good story idea, just too much close to Sonic Battle (at least, what this trailer has taught us).
gunnchief responds:
Well, the story is actually this:
After Emerl's defeat, two unknown professor's make a clone of Emerl and fix the clone (Also stopping the power overload problem) They also built a lot of Emerl's Move Database inside the robot.They name the clone Phi-Zero and put it through testing to see how powerful It was, however when they put Psi-Zero on a mission to collect the emeralds, something triggered inside him and he betrayed the two professors and went to achieve full power of the emeralds.This plot takes place after Sonic Battle of course, but you're right, the trailer doesn't show what I said strongly enough, however I'll start on the first episode soon.
You shouldn't rate your reviews a 1 just because you haven't asked me the plot. I hate reviewers with dumb dramatic scores
Nice
Nice.
This trailer springs an idea, but you have a series to make so I'm not going to share it now.
Not bad
Can't wait to see what you can do with this
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