not bad
not bad,but if you can make it a little more faster and with a little more humor,i would give you 10/10 stars.Still its great animation for the first time!
i plan on making a series of these, so yeah.... i hope u enjoy
and btw this is the first animation i'v made, except for the preveiw for this one
not bad
not bad,but if you can make it a little more faster and with a little more humor,i would give you 10/10 stars.Still its great animation for the first time!
Nice.
Great idea. If you'll make a series, you'll have to be inventive with the weapons.
The face!
What was wrong with his face!? If your face is like that mister, stay in doors!! But seriously, good work for a first, was well animated I thought, apart from the hammer at the end needed to come down faster, it was a bit slow.... Like you know, add a bit of "swoosh" to it! Anywho, good flash and keep it up... Should try a bit more of an original concept for a series though! Overall pleasant to watch! ^^
very Unoriginal
A stick guy trying to open a box. Ive seen it so many times. I watched it I relized it was just a complete copy cat of some one elses idea and animation. The drawings werent that bad really but you need to work on the explosions and make it run smoother. Please im begging you dont make this into a series. Try making another cartoon with a more original concept. I have to admit Im really impressed with the drawings considering this is your first animation.
"Well done."
Well first off you got the whole "stick animation" style laid out very well. Smooth motion and tweenin, with some fairly good graphics I could say (not much really expected for a stick flash). Sound would be your main problem here, you should lower or cut the sound/music file so it will not take as much MB. But besides that you did a great job! Can't wait till part 2, so keep at it.
~BDB~