Nice going
That was a total success if you ask me for you very first flash :D It was short and the audio was clammy plus the animation was teh nubz but you did great for your fist time.
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Ok so my first submission ever ( Bad day in test chamber...check obituaries) didn't make it. Didn't really expect it to was mainly looking for feedback from you wonderful dudes and dudettes with more experience.
So here is my second atempt ever at Flash creation. It's short but has potential for sequels and improvement I know, still looking for feedback and if you guys like it well good, if you dont please give me constructive help dont just stab at me.... it might have bugs but please consider that this is second ever for me... added sound this time, dont get all the workings yet but it's a start and it might not fit the theme that well but hey , had to try with something so tell me what you think, took me a couple of hours of leisurly going through different animation techniques so give me lots of reviews with feedback and tips please!!!!
Interesting
For a first flash i liked it (anyway i don't do flash myself so who i am to judge lol). the animations wasn't great but your your idea and choice of music tells me that you got some good imagination that only need to be used. If you improve your skills i think you can do great in the future!
useful responds:
thanks
Okkkkkkk...
Short, a little funny and weird music (that repeats in a loop and contenuiously goes in a loopif you get what i mean :P) Too short tho...
useful responds:
i know about the audio problem sorry, i'm still figuring flash out!!!
Haha
Definietley wasn't as bad as other people's first flash, and the concept was great! XD Just work a little harder on your animation/artist skills and work a little harder on dialogue/storyboards and you'll do fine in the future. Good Job! My 5 went to this cause of the concept. Cheers!
Your Comrade,
Methlodis
useful responds:
Thanks dude, I'll definitly be working harder on next ones this was mainly a test for me to see how everything works with flash!
COM
PRESS. your audio! compress it! i know there's steps for doing so somewhere on ng. do that next time. the file size is inexcusable for a crappy stick flash like this.
useful responds:
Thanks for advice, but you didnt have to call it a crappy stick flash i'm no pro just testing the functions of flash before i get serious on a bigger project. But thanks for the tip about the audio , will look it up