Haha..

It was rather funny but I see much points for improvement:

The sun in the beginning, you make it slowly fade in, but not slowly fade out.. it would look better if you would let it fade back too I think.

A little more and better timed sounds

And last but not least: make it go a little slower please.. this went all so fast.

Good luck with the second part.. I hope I will notice it in time and watch how this ends! ;)

Steve

Very impressive for your first flash

I'm sure this will get protected. Very impressive for a first flash, you definitely have potential. The main thing that I saw was a lack of plot, but you incorporated some funny things. It's a bit random, but I would encourage you to continue with your idea!

I like Obie

This series has potential. I liked Obie a lot. Your animation was pretty good, and the limited use of audio and dialouge seemed to be on purpose. I enjoyed watching it, and I can tell you actually put some effort into this. I hope to see Obie around more.

dont say ZOMG first flash :( im lame dont blam...

yeah this was really bad and the fact that you say its your first means people should be as criticle as possible or you will never get better