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heres a demo of the full version, i have rl stuff to do now such as dating coming up, but ill try to finish. comment on whats done so far please. thanks.
Great, but it needs to be finished.
The animation is great, it all fits together really well. I love the sprites! You should definetly finish it. You have great pottential, keep it up, dude!
P.S. Broly kicks ASS!!!
Good effort.
Sprites is alright if you can pull them off effectively. 8-bit theatre anyone?
But yea it was really slow paced which is really like dragonball z. just continue to work on it and soon you'll be doin full animations.
Love,
TheReeferman
SSJDarkFlare responds:
lmao 8 bit theater LIVES! lmao i didnt want it to be like the show.. but i dunno, anyways, ill try harder. thanks for the comment.
Average.
Too slow paced. Plus i think you should work with proper animation instead of sprites. They are ok, but if you want to improve on skill. you'll probably want to try animating real stuff. Even start with sticks.
But it was fine. If you want to continue sprites which is fine i suggest faster paced action.
I'll be looking out for your next animation.
SSJDarkFlare responds:
alright cool, and i hate stick movies lol.. they just.. super saiyan goku and super saiyan 2 gohan look the same. ppl get confused and so on. and i cant draw at all haha. so ill practice with sprites. and improve FPS and imiging. ty for the comment.
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mmm well the sounds are not so good sometimes, like doesn't one scream every time he gets hit (unless in the lungs rendering someone speechless) next to that it needs more realism, i never seen anyone in dragonball z power up right after being hit with 2 blasts. without showing some damage first.
last of all it needs speed. each time he hits him away he should go a bit faster then the last time, and it needs more speed in general...
and if u got al that covered u could start thinking of gravity, they might be able to fly but if u go one away after a time the speed takes down and he starts to be the subject of gravity, so in stead of using straight tweens use guides to let them fly with a curve.
hope this helps
SSJDarkFlare responds:
Lol you watch alvin earthworm alot dont you? every word you just said is a scene from his movies lol, i love his movies, but i have my style, he has his. thanks for the comment.