Stupid Judge-Referee
One kid has been grounded by his mother-not his mother just pretend to be his mother.HAHAHAHA.
Tony won fair and square but the judge didnt wanted him to win.
Author Comments
this is my first flash submission hope you like.
Good first submission
Good for a first flash, and with encouragement we'll hopefully see more in the future. I was happy to contribute my voice, and will be more than willing to do future submissions. Keep it up!
titan210 responds:
thanks everybody for your reviews
and by the way BMack24 i didn't do the voice acting =P Reputator did
5/5 9/10 Good.
Quite good for your first, make the animation faster and add a few more frames. :D
Great first prod
Has a beginning, middle and end and decent voice acting - all the ingredients for good storytelling. Best of luck for the future.
hrmm..
well when it started i figured it was going to be an instant blam, but then there was voice acting and an actual plot! and not crappy, low-quality voice acting like in most first submissions, it sounded clean and was well-executed. so you got that going for you, which is nice. the art and animation were a little 'meh' but if you keep practicing you'll surely get better. if nothing else you could have a future as a voice actor around here.