Good
To small/short but it was good
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This was something I wipped up in 5 hours and my first test using FBF animation without sprites. I have to say that it is difficult and very short, but I figured might as well send it in. Don't vote harshly and I would prefer constructive critisicm. I know it is very, very, very, very, very, very short.
to short
Nice concept but I blinked, and i missed it.
Good start
I voted harshly because I don't want the site to fill with tests.
But I will try to be constructive!
Put a little bit more time in your animations, I can tell that you didn't take more than a day just without reading your comments.
The storyline, although short is a bit hard to comprehend, work on that and present your characters.
Just because this is your first test with FBF it doesn't means that you don't have to take things seriously.
Keep it up!
Eyes were good, the rest could use some work.
The beginning eyes were really good, the quality progressively got worse it seemed.
Take more time on your animations.
Too-Demonsional responds:
As I progressed further and further into boredom.
hmm
i was getting into it,
and then it ended lol.
if you made something like this
with a lot more detail, and definetely
longer, i think it'd be pretty good.
Too-Demonsional responds:
This was kind of one of my old projects that I wanted to do. A demon fighting other demons disguised as a teenager.
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