This isn't even a flash

This is barely a .gif

All it has is just some bad sound effects, and a bunch of colored blobs.
The filesize should have been somewhere near...oh, idk..200 kilobytes?

I don't know flash and I could have made this in 30 minutes.

There's really no way you can improve on this, other than to stop making flash.

How was this 10 MB?

I think you could of came up with something better, this looks like it took a day, instead of 2 months.

OMFG!

OMFG reymen is blue!!!!!:) :)
dude thet is an alsom flash!
you need to work a litel more about flash buT thet is dem good!

Good ideas but poorly animated.

You should work more on your characters, they were too basic. your backgrounds got better as your story went on. There's alot of room for improvement all around.
To tell you the truth, I didn't really get your story. Maybe adding some more dialog or voices would have helped. It does seem like you put a lot of effort into this. Keep practicing with flash and you will get better.

~H.E.

i get the plot...sort of...

but it sucked graphically and the sound track as well. AND it was 10 MEG...wtf