ok. better this time. this time the story line makes way more sense but he should of died because he was that close to the bomb. but thats too much logic. although it would be cooler if the mountain started to explode and then jump off like in the REAL movies. you know like james bond. and in the real game super mario bros 2 only luigi can jump that high!!!!!! but overall its pretty good i feel like a critic " The Jovani times gives it a 9 out of 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Still after all those complaints i still liked it!!!!
4 outa' 5 8 outa 10 ight? Anyway... I couldn't read like half the text cause it was like way too fast, yet some other sentences took too long to get to the next text... so... you might wanna even that out...
This was good, but why did lue kill l-block if they were both on the same side?
Can't wait to see A.S.G. plus I hope you take time to make the next one because I feel like you can probly get it to be awsome.
very nice movie, i liked the FF music you had in there, very creative. good job.