i actually liked it.

it was kind of funny but the voice was wrong horribly wrong.

Voice

THe voice is so annoying. ugh!

It was ok

The graphics were likable, but the voice was a lil hoarse. Srry.

The review~~~~

pros on your hard work-
short file-a good size kb is always good :)
'eye pleasing' graphics-they matched up well with the flash
custom pre-loader-it shows you worked hard on this flash

cons of your hard work-
the voice-We know you can't help it so I wont deduct much
The storyline-It was not to be expected but could have been better.

overall

5/10
DECENT SCORE!

Quite amusing, actually.

Better than I thought it was going to be. It was pretty funny, but I'm not quite sure if I liked the voice. I know, you can't really change your voice, but it just didn't go with the animation too well for me. Nice job anyways though.

WTF?!?!?

Uh, what was being said and what was going on?