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BRUTALLY HONEST PLEASE!
ANY WAY TO IMPROVE LET ME KNOW

Thank you for watching.
any Questions please PM me.

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sweet deal man

Niiiiiiice!

Nice job guy! The only things I can think of to make that any better besides what has been said already, is that you should have used a slightly 3D platform for the chars to stand on, such as those in games like River City Ransom. If you don't know what I'm talkin about, just PM me and I'll get you a picture.

Nice job!

rigo01 responds:

thank you for taking the time to check it out.

i am on it.

duuude!

smooth sprites, good story and funny as hell
..even though my speakers dont work ><

rigo01 responds:

lol thank you bro hahaha
the sound it was decent i have to say lol
hahah but thank you!!

it was ok

it could had belonger

rigo01 responds:

thanks will make it longer.

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Typical sprite movie. Here's two things I think you could change to make it better

- speed up the text or add voices instead, more time seemed to be spent on waiting for the text than there was actual animation
- zoom up on the characters and decrease the total area of the background

rigo01 responds:

Thanks ill take your advice and use my own voice to use up all the characters it kinda bugged me as well with the text.

ok ill try new points of view with zooming in when they either walk in or something, thanks for your review.

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Uploaded
Jan 28, 2008
8:29 PM EST