WHAO!!!
perfectly done!!! char,script,action,evrythin is juz superb,mayb a little bit longer wud b more gr8...well done mate xD
Reviews for "Makoto-Lee Appears"
rigo01 responds:
THANKS MAN! haha i appreciate ur review!
Great fast paced action.
The action was fast paced, clean and well done.
However, there is one HUGE drawback!
The dialogue is way too slow, slowing down the pace of the movie and kills the viewers interest in finishing watching the entire thing.
If you can speed that up, the movie would likely get an even higher score.
rigo01 responds:
Thank you for your review, ive already taken using Voices as talking instead of text and you are right.
I havn't done a review in a long time...
But I figured you might want some advice on how to improve it.
Well 1st off, when people are talking, it's better to do it word by word, rather than by letter. People don't read like they're sounding out the words. =/
Try to use different moves and flash effects, and remember that as long as the animation is smooth and easy to follow, faster is better, unless you're using dramatic effects that need to be better focused on. Sound was fine. And using more than 1 setting is always a plus. Probably the thing that bugged the most was the speed of the movie, and how slow the people were talking. Good luck though. ^.^
rigo01 responds:
thanks for your Review now that im seeing what i didnt do to well i see how i can improve, ok so its either word by word or voice clips ^_^
thank you and ill be sure to make it even better next time!