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well this is a poem i wrote a little while ago its not that great its pretty basic and some words dont match up and what not but oh well oh and im tring color again tell me what you think

the poem is about a mythological(celtic or irish or something) spirit the spirit of the crow wind and sorrow

and in case you didnt catch the poem here it is

a malphos, a soul among the rain
a shadow full of pain
a lonely spirit abandoned and lost
whos choices his life did cost
a ghastly figure alone
wandering a land unknown
its only company is that of crows
with caws of highs and lows
a masked soul among feathered shadows
an entity set free by the gallows
a faceless creation of sorrow and regret
trapped in eternal sunset
memories of friends and happiness long forgotten
only wars and pain of past is gotten
when he remembers he will be set free
till that day we will have to wait and see
by Dustin curry

thanx 4 watching

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good

cool, you are extreamly good at drawing creatures! Best drawing i think was the crow... do you use a grafics tablet for this?



Maybe I should ask you to host mine

Well done on the story's words of sorrow and heart. A story told as though it was dark. Someday if you wish to aid in my words with your vision. Your work will rise when you catch the eye of vision, as well as the heart of a poem's part. My stars will belong your imagination mark.


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Jestercap13 responds:

hey thanx you realy talk like a artist or poet lol


Pretty good

I think this movie was pretty good, I mean the poem was cool and all and I really enjoyed the art and the music. I think it would have more of an effect if you had someone reading it... but that's just my opinion.


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Jestercap13 responds:

yeah i thought about that but i need a better mic. because it makes my voice all fuzz but yeah


WOW GREAT FLASH!!

Only one thing you can do to turn this awsome flash into a legendary flash.
add voice.

AWSOME JOB

Make more please.

keep up the great work, and have a AWSOME day. =-)


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Jestercap13 responds:

thanx yeah i should have had voices in my next one meby lol


Not bad

Some voiceover saying the poem would've been nice but the SFX were pretty good
the poem was pretty good as well
music was nice
the drawings were pretty nice and the animation was alright

a 7/10


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Jestercap13 responds:

yeah i should have had voices oh well next time right

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Score
3.16 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 21, 2008
8:37 PM EST
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