good
cool, you are extreamly good at drawing creatures! Best drawing i think was the crow... do you use a grafics tablet for this?
Author Comments
well this is a poem i wrote a little while ago its not that great its pretty basic and some words dont match up and what not but oh well oh and im tring color again tell me what you think
the poem is about a mythological(celtic or irish or something) spirit the spirit of the crow wind and sorrow
and in case you didnt catch the poem here it is
a malphos, a soul among the rain
a shadow full of pain
a lonely spirit abandoned and lost
whos choices his life did cost
a ghastly figure alone
wandering a land unknown
its only company is that of crows
with caws of highs and lows
a masked soul among feathered shadows
an entity set free by the gallows
a faceless creation of sorrow and regret
trapped in eternal sunset
memories of friends and happiness long forgotten
only wars and pain of past is gotten
when he remembers he will be set free
till that day we will have to wait and see
by Dustin curry
thanx 4 watching
Maybe I should ask you to host mine
Well done on the story's words of sorrow and heart. A story told as though it was dark. Someday if you wish to aid in my words with your vision. Your work will rise when you catch the eye of vision, as well as the heart of a poem's part. My stars will belong your imagination mark.
Jestercap13 responds:
hey thanx you realy talk like a artist or poet lol
Pretty good
I think this movie was pretty good, I mean the poem was cool and all and I really enjoyed the art and the music. I think it would have more of an effect if you had someone reading it... but that's just my opinion.
Jestercap13 responds:
yeah i thought about that but i need a better mic. because it makes my voice all fuzz but yeah
Not bad
Some voiceover saying the poem would've been nice but the SFX were pretty good
the poem was pretty good as well
music was nice
the drawings were pretty nice and the animation was alright
a 7/10
Jestercap13 responds:
yeah i should have had voices oh well next time right
