pure crap
this is going no where... art was crap and the mouth movement pissed me off. keep trying
Author Comments
This is just a preview of what this series will be about. but I am only going to make it if you guys like the idea. so comment and tell me!
Neat idea but....
Its a very neat idea I'll have to give you that...
If you do make it...
- Have a background more often
- Have them be longer
- Spend some more time on character design
- Add some music/other sound in the background
- No offence but your voice is a little high....maybe use some sound effects or something to balance it out.
Daibsler responds:
yeah thanks for the tips! and yeah my voice is actually a little high but in that video i changed my voice a little
I would prefer...
that you improve before submitting series, but, it wasn't so bad, just improve
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