Warning!! This flash contains French!! There is subtitles.
I created this flash for a French project based on recycling. I know it's not great but it was the best I can do in a week. It was also my first time working with sound, so I apologize for any fuzzyness. I blame it on my french. My teacher is easy to impress so I got an easy 100%.
P$: The song that I say is bad is actually a really good song. Ive even made a flash music video for it which you can view on my profile.
Edit: Ok, so I know that my animation isnt great but I find it kind of sad that an animation I spent one week on gets a better score than one I spent 2 months on. Oh well, thats life.
It was alright but...
It was a good movie, honestly. Interesting plot.. The only thing is the volume difference between the music samples and the actual character voices was very very big... if I were to turn up the volume loud enough to hear the voices, the music would probably deafen me... It also sounded like you were a little too close to your mic... Next time try moving away from your mic a little bit but turning up your recording volume to even it out..that should fix it. =)
Thanks for the suggestion about the volume and believe me, I noticed but I kinda created it for school and decided I didnt want to spend the time fixing it because it was in french anyways and most people would just read the subtitles. Again thanks. I ll definetly work harder on sound next project.
Animation could use some work...
But hey, you speak French!
The voices are way too soft to hear anything...
...Yeah, pretty much that's it. Other than that, this covers all the important things that should be in a flash, such as a plot and fair graphics, although you are cutting it kind of close on both of those categories.