not a bad one for your first time besides i saw worse craps on NG b4
It's a start. You need to be faster, either by more action or faster one-liners. Guys sitting around waiting for someone to talk just makes things boring.
Seriously, though, work on this. There is a distinctive lack of parodies for one of the most popular PC games in play today!
Well, part 2 begins with a field briefing, but once it's over, it'll be moving pretty quickly. Hopefully it's what you're looking for, if not... Well, I'm not sure then. My thought process usually has me thinking that multiple things going on might get people confused. Maybe I'll put a menu in Part 2 for scene selection.
There's hope here...
....voices aren't bad,..graphics need work,...maybe a faster pace. But theres raw talent there. Keep trying man.
Thanks for the positive feedback, the graphics I'm designing for the next part are a lot better, and there will be a lot more action in it, since the battle hasn't technically started in Part 1 yet. Keep your eyes open, because I'll be releasing that as soon as it's done.
but i thought the graphics and sounds REALLY needed some work.
I know that the voice overs need work, but I was pretty sure the sound effects were fine. Also, I know the graphics need some work, and in Part 2 all the graphics should be improved. I've got some good ideas waiting for Part 2, so check it out, I should have it done in anywhere from a few days to a couple weeks.
However, your thoughtfulness to the projected audience is evident. This will take you far once your skills improve. That is all.
Thanks, don't forget to watch for Part 2, The Hotel!