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20 fps and blood test

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i know i shouldn't be posting movies that are just test clips. but i posted this because i wanted some oppinnion on what to improve in other to make my upcoming series better so please leave comments.
really doesn't matter what it is just e write and i'll see if i can make a change.

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nice!

nice nice nice...... some times it lagged.... but it's very good... i love the way the blood flew on the rock... another thing.... everybody in the reviews say that you should put a storyline.... but if it's a test.... there shouldn't be a storyline XD so your doing great!


threassance responds:

yeah you're right. but it's pretty old now. i guess i learnt from those mistake. thanks alex.


still not makein story line eh

tight short no story line and dude take time man if u take time in the end it is worth it


threassance responds:

wow, you're right. but guess what, i finally started one. i named it kraft. so check it out.


what you need to do

this had good animation
and if the rest of the movie continued like this i would probably watch it
BEWARE! have a story! dont let this fall into the endless array of other stick fight crap. This one looks good and you seem to have put alot of effort into it!
good luck


threassance responds:

i'll try my best.


Well done

I hate stick films somthing chronic, but as far as animation goes this is really quite good. You animations of the stick figures themselves are nice and smooth. I hated the ball of light thing in the air at the start and I think it could do with some improvement but you made up for it afterwards with smooth animation. The blood was quite jumpy though as has been said. Take your time and keep doing what you are and I'm sure it'll turn out fine, good job :)


threassance responds:

thanks.


My thoughts

3: starting score

animation, +1, was good, It's GREAT to hear that you ARE taking your time!

story, 0, there wasn't a story, but I acknowledge that this is a test, no negative points for this

sounds/acting: +1, sounds were good quality, used well

Length: -1, was to short, still know that it's a test, but still, it's a flash.

Verdict 4/5 B

Side note, KEEP TAKING YOUR TIME! rush it and it'll suck, the blood was good, but a tiny bit jumpy.


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threassance responds:

wow.i must i'm shocked and imperested. i really need someone like u arround to know when i'm taking the wrong part.thanks for the advice i'll look into everything.i really appreciate all the help and support.thanks.

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2.24 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 18, 2008
9:51 PM EST
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