Mikaels' War (Pilot ep)

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I think it may lag just a tad, i dont know.
Its been awhile since i have submited
so go easy i havn't used flash for a long
time =P, reviews are welcome, i will
reply to all, even if there criticisim!


a few quick things

you misspelled weres it should have been wheres, other than that it was a solid flash, if you are going to make a series and use military terms you might want to look a few facts up first though an 80mm shell is smaller than your average tank shell which is normally about 120mm, however it's not that important. a solid flash, keep up the good work

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tpurgatoryt responds:

thanks bails for the review, argh theres allways some sort of spelling mistake in my toons, oh well. But wasnt the 88 mm a greatly feared cannon? i must be a bit rusty on my knowledge, anyway thanks =D.

Not bad !

This looks like the beginning of a nice series ^^.

The loading indicator doesnt works, it only says "Loading", but no bar is filled or anything. Nevertheless it loads pretty quick so that isnt really a big deal.

Another you typed "Soldire" instead of "Soldier" once but that isnt much of a hassle ether.

All in all it looks pretty good, keep going :D

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tpurgatoryt responds:

grrr theres my bed spelling for you!
yeah i didn't know what was going on with the preloader, but i thought it would be okay seeing as it is a small file, thanks =]

hey dude

it would only work for me using pop-up but not bad!

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tpurgatoryt responds:

Hmmm thats odd, I don't know if i can fix that myself(?), and thanks =D

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3.13 / 5.00

Jan 18, 2008
6:35 AM EST
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