Hi everyone, my first flash and first submission, theres no audio so its still work in progress,
its a character - Green from the Team Badger, a comic strip/story that is already on paper, now
working on flash! so ill have a few more characters, better graphics (^^) and dialog, etc..
thanks for taking time to watch!,
peace, Taito.
good
i like him, when youve given him some colour, and put him in some scenes i could really see him kicking the shiz' outta some zombies, and leviathans...but im getting ahead of myself, keep it up, wanna see one of 'Black Jack' like a profile or a short on each character to sum em up. anyway keep it up!
Not awful
Not much bad but needed a lot of improvements.
It should have had a decent background, and the animation should have been
better.
Otherwise, quite good.......
lol tell me about it, if i made the improvememnts would you re rate it?
Somewhat decent..
Ehh.. it was alright.
I'd improve on the animation, and probably add a background.
Still, decent for a first.
2/5
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Thanks, thats a very fair score, i agree i need to work on backgrounds!
just got used to layering!!
peace.
Decent
It was alright, nothing interesting, but animation wasnt terrible. Put some sounds in, and a good story, might see some really good ones.
cheers, i do have all that stuff lined up, nothing short on story believe me, and for once its not just "guy kills stuff" either, i have a 4 man team to finish AND a car,
think half life2 ep2, s.t.a.l.k.e.r, just alot wider!