VERY SHORT
Wow, that was extremely short. Pretty good music, but not only is it short, but it doesnt have anything interesting to watch. Next time, make it longer and better drawings please :)
UPDATE: WOW, I didn't know I was so bad at flash, if you guys were amazing when you started well great for you, because this is my first animation. Congratulations. My next animation I will make longer, and try to do better drawings, I'm sorry that I'm not great at drawings on my first try....
This is sorta like a music video. I thought the song was good for this, it is Purple Heart by Goat. This is my first Flash animation ever, I'm not very good at drawing but I did my best. Its short because I didn't have enough time to do any more. Please try and not be to harsh on me, atleast give me constructive chritizism. Thats about it, enjoy the toon!
VERY SHORT
Wow, that was extremely short. Pretty good music, but not only is it short, but it doesnt have anything interesting to watch. Next time, make it longer and better drawings please :)
Ehh...
You did OKAY for a first. Not too good at all.
You can do variations in hand placements on the guitar solos and it MAY look realisticER
seriously? Com on,
if you really like the song that much then spend the extra time and make it good. This surely won't tribute or honor the song. Sorry I can't be more constructive, but you can see what's wrong with it. Don't work under time constraints like that if its going to make the movie come out poorly. Make the extra effort or don't do it at all. Anything inbetween is just wasteful.
First time?
This is great for a first time flash, but I would say to try and make your characters more realistic in ways, not elementry school stick men.. No offence. But other than that, a good thing to do would be to time the slides right in the guitar, and make sure that your always getting as MUCH detail as possible, People eat that up. =]
bad
GOOD: um... i guess i like music videos.
BAD: well, the drawing was freakin' pathetic. the guitar looked more like a mishapen penis than a guitar. it was too short, and you forgot to inset a stop(); action at the last frame, so it looped.
SUGGESTIONS: you should practice drawing and remember to put in the stop action.