Ronan....

well i've seen better but at least we know your capable of much more... KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mmm i kinda liked it :)

I'd give you a 7/10 cause i liked it and very random :) Great work ! and keep it up!

well...

It definatly matches the title of what you're doing...

Hiberna was a bit right with the drawing, I suppose the animation isnt all that bad, and you got the sound to match up with what you were animating...so yeah. Extremly short, but not the most horrible thing I've seen on newgrounds.

Disappointing.

Minimum animation, pretty badly drawn, and just not really that good.

I understand its your first flash, but how about submitting a week or so worth of work and give a 'good' first impression of your animating ability eh?

Add a storyline, spend more time on the art etc.

-Hiberna

I don't get what you tried to do with this.

Was it meant to be a person who just lashes out at the camera? If so, it would of been much better if it made your viewers jump. Maybe a much louder sound effect would be needed and quicker animation. (just speed up the frame rate. A.k.a. frames per second) For something extremely short, the file size was silly.

The idea was good but it could of been much better. Well, try it again and see if you can improve on this. 3/10.