ummm...cant say im enthusiastic about part two
overall the flash wasnt that great, the sound was ok, the animation wasnt crap like most first submissions are, but i cant say the story has me grasped, but for your first flash great so good job
Author Comments
Be sure to have Flash 8 before you watch this cartoon!
Okay, here it is. My first submission to the Flash Portal. It took me almost a year to make this, so you have no fear of this being a slipshod job.
I got the idea from this from reading a preview of Twilight Princess. Because i didn't read it properly, I assumed that there had been two Links, one who was a farmer boy and one who was the hero, and I thought that the fam boy went to awaken the hero.
I'll agree that there is plenty of room for improvement, especially in my drawing of Zelda (heh, heh) but I think it's decent for a beginner like me. Anyway, feel free to tell me what you like and don't like about the cartoon, and no cuss words if you please.
even now, I'm starting work on part 2, which will be following in a few months' time. Don't worry, I'm not like those guys who tell you to wait for part 2, and then start something new, or take forever to make another part.
Well, see it, and just wait for part II.
LordHayden responds:
Yeah, decent for my level of experience then.
strange...
Kinda half baked cartoons, but a good effort even though you have the repeating salemans in the background in the market part. I think that you need to look in the story a little more, but what was with that anyway? But you get a 'C' for effort...
LordHayden responds:
I wasn't too good with Flash when I made this.
Not bad at all.
I love the story idea, it was really really good.
The animation was alright, not the best I have ever seen, but without a doubt good.
The audio was actually really really good.
All in all a very good flash, only way I can think to improve on it is maybe to make it longer or something.
LordHayden responds:
You may want to watch part II then.
not good
not good
LordHayden responds:
Be specific please
Ok.....
Its ok, but not good ;) Better not let Zelda crawl that gay again.
LordHayden responds:
What's that supposed to mean?