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Jigsaw's Basement

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this is my first flash movie, so i know it sucks, i made it with a crappy editor too. i dont know how to put a preloader in so bear with me. if anyone can help me or just have some tips....send me a message.
i did have alot of fun making it though.....enjoy this shitty video!
follow your dreams, make one too.
also i origanaly put this on youtube with my real-life vids,....im KASTFILMS!

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7/10

The Introduction was way too long(-1). Measly drawings (-2). Static Sounds in the background (-1). Overall Concept (+0).

My Review...

Nice Idea, poorly executed...

Next time, add a Preloader..
Pratice on your animation..
Use REAL soundaffects, not you Impersonating it like the door thing..
Pratice a little more on the voice acting, and remove the censor of the cuss words..

However, the humour was pritty good IMHO, but you better work on your jokes aswell..

Anyway, hope that helps and maybe I'll see better work from you soon..

kastfilms responds:

thanks....that does help:)

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it migth have been a nice animation if it wasnt because:
- The intro was reallly long
- You could hardly distinguish something
- the whole things was static

but the idea was good though

kastfilms responds:

thanx for being nice about it.
some people on this site r mean.

hmm

Why was it exported as a non-Flash movie and put back into Flash? Now it's a whopping 8 megabytes, even though there's hardly any animation.
The intro should be much shorter too.

kastfilms responds:

ok...thanks for the helpful tips:)

Preloader

First off, there's a shitload of tutorials on this site. In the flash submission page there is a link to the newgrounds/flash page. There you can find links to said tutorials, not to mention of standard Newgrounds preloaders.

kastfilms responds:

ok..i see the preloaders now...but how do i attach them to my next flash?...please, im terrible at this and need help.

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Uploaded
Jan 12, 2008
1:28 AM EST

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