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unfinished stick guy 2

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actually i would have like it to be more like a continued storyline of the first one but, like i said before i lost the data of the first and just couldn't get it back. but anyways i'm still on my track of working hard each time, i only got two animations on the ground now, but more are still gonna come, so i hope i get better. thanks for watchimg or voting at all. i really appreciate it.

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My review

3: starting score

Animation;
text -0.5, text over the head was annoying, do more of a final fantasy text format
faces -0.5, keep faces off of sticks, the max that should be on them are eyes
motion +0.5, smooth, good, tiny bit choppy and don't match eachother sometimes (i.g. the fist punch at the begining)

sound +1, well used, fitting music, A on this

story 0, they are sticks fighting, there is no story, no plus or minus for this.

Verdict 3.5/5
Vote 3/5

Side note: I'll send you an example of the text format I'm talking about if you want


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threassance responds:

yeah, and thanks for the information. i really like ur way of rating videos, it really helps animators know what to improve when animating. and the text thing, i really will need it, for my next clip that will be out soon. thanks again, i really appreciate it.


hmm

i think you were unlucky to get such a low score, it was worth more than 1.94. you can animate stickmen okay, not great, but okay. your basic movements arn't too bad. alot of your punches and kicks looked a bit choppy and there was far too much talking, it got a bit boring at times. im sure if you keep practising you'll get better :).


threassance responds:

o.k. thanks i'll surelly remeber to practice alot.


hmmm

interesting
seems like a mix between xaio xaio and dbz
pretty rough, but good fighting
i'm gonna keep an eye out for anything you post in the future, because you show promise as a great animator


threassance responds:

thanks, i, won't let u down. keep watching and i promise i'll make sure i meet up u especttation.


nice dude

it was tight but u should make a story line


threassance responds:

you know i really i' m getting into making story lines, this actually is still one of those test clip to help me get use to flash a little bit better. keep watching my animation will soon be in about a month from now promise it will be full of actions, and a very good and interesting story.


Not bad!

It was cool, you could better the texts/quotes.


threassance responds:

thanks for the advice i'll try to do better.

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4,197
Votes
295
Score
2.03 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 10, 2008
1:18 AM EST
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