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blue fight(finished)

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ive been using easytoon, so if my stuffs to good for a second, its cause i had practice

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wow its very very good

i like it its very very good.god

ey, its RobinDB!!!

I think that with the whole repeating problem you could turn it inot a positive, lyk just make the fight go back to the left side of the screen and set them back into the original positions right at the end, so it looks lyk you meant it to repeat.
Godd job anyways ur getting better!

A stick fight.

First thing, I would add a play button and a replay button. I understanding not having them gives the effect that it's neverending - but it's nice to have options. That being said, this was not a bad stick fight. Good use of gratitious sound effects to match the actions. There was no annoying music loop which is good. In future work, I'd work on making the movie a little bit longer - and have different backgrounds.



That was good fighting, and a good movie. The only thing that stuck out was the presentation. The FBF is chunky. And the stick figures seem to get bigger as they go on. Here's a few things to focus on:

Have a bit more smooth animation. Perfect theme, bad animation.
Have a preloader. I bet that brang your score down bad.

If you really want to get into Flash, you might as well stop using flash subsitutes.

Back again eh?

As said before, you've def got the talent when it comes to stick fighting. I really like the direction that you keep going with this but it didn't feel like there was a true ending (that could be cause of the looping). Nicer scenery could help out too. Glad to see you passed the judgement phase however and I don't really see this getting blammed anytime soon so at the very least, that has to be encouragement to keep at it, right? :)

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4.48 / 5.00

Jan 7, 2008
12:29 AM EST