Something I whipped up not too long ago. Its certainly not my best work but something about it really appeals to me and I would like to start making slash like this more often, of better standards of course.
If you review give constructive criticism please, I would like to know what people want in these type of flashes, not what they don't like about mine. :/
not that good
i can understand that it is your first attempt at this sort of flash so i won't slag it off or call you names.
you should make the animation slower so that people can see whats going on.
You should add somekind of a background
and you should make it longer
There really wasn't much to review there...
Well, I'm pretty sure you were going for one of those animations that goes from one picture to another. It's a fairly easy concept, but hard to make it so that people will really enjoy it. I think some keys to a good flash like this are to have a theme throughout the entire thing, have a logical progression of drawings to tell a story or convey an idea or process, and use music and have the animations go along with it.
Your flash moved to quickly, it was hard to tell what was going on.
I know this was a test, but I rate all flashes on how much I enjoyed watching them.
0/5
Thanks for the honest review, as said in previous reviews, this is a new style for me to be working on and its not something I fully have the concept of quite yet.
I am going to be working on a new one when I have time however, the new one will be better drawn, have a story behind it, and the flash will progress at a slower speed so the said story can be understood.
Wow Lotus, I'm disappionted.
I thought you'd be above this.
The title screen fooled me, of course. But when I pressed play, it was a bunch of lines and a poorly drawn heart, apparently.
Please, make a decent flash, even if you can't draw very well, you could have at least got an A for Effort, but this is sad.
You should learn animation, or try sprites, if you're not up to it.
I now how to animate fine actually, I just didn't have much time to work on a flash at the moment and I wanted to submit something thats a new style for me.
I know its nothing special and everything is poorly done, but I just wanted to see a public reaction for this type of flash to see if its something people wish to see more of, speaking of the flash style of course, not the poorly drawn antics of it. ^^
Thanks for the review and the honesty, its appreciated.
Great idea!!
I liked it, but I couldn't figure out what was going on with the animaion.
I was practicing a new style I would like to get better at. I know its nothing special but I hope to get better at it and make submissions, with the same concept behind them, in the future.
Thanks for the review.