You'll develop

This was short and unoriginal with very crude art, but you're new, it's not going to be perfect...Okay, enough euphemisms, it's almost definitely going to be bad -- very bad. But you've knicked some key elements. The timing was pretty much spot on, and you at least added background and some frame transitions. Keep working at it and you'll come along.

Made me laugh

Hey idk why you people are so hard on this, I am a beginner as well and I know how hard you can work on these things and then when you're all happy you finished it and post it here comes people like you to get your hopes down. It made me laugh, and I think that's the point of it, not looking good or having a happy fairytale ending, 3.5/5 on this one.

Did you try?

It seems like you worked hard on certain elements but rushed other parts of it. This has been done a thousand times before. You know? Next time try to perfect everything and do something original.

Keep up the good work and try harder. :)

Uhhh

The artwork is fair, but is it even done? It...is a pretty neat idea, but how can I rate you on something that well...isn't done....or doesn't really have a good ending. I'll have to blam until you finish it.

It does look good though, I am so sorry. Try finishing it, or re-doing the ending....if that WAS it. >.>; [1 or 2 - 5]

~Itami~

wasn't good...

poor animation and art. The syncing wasn't great. The drawings were really half done. You said you worked really hard and they looked like they were drawn very quickly and lack any type of detail or style. Detail isn't everything but if you don't have some sort of generic style...it just won't do. This isn't good, and the choice of theme wasn't good either. The music was very bland and boring and nothing on this flash was very appealing. Sorry if you spent a lot of time on it, but I didn't think it was good at all.