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Here my first flash, hope u will love it


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try harder next time.

the animation had some real potential but it needs alot more work. in essence, it really shouldnt be considered an animation since nothing really moved. i liked the humor of the animation tho. the WoW references were pretty funny. (i used to play world of warcraft about a year and a half ago) keep trying and you can get better!

blindsniper responds:

Yeppi you got the wow reference =D

Eh... needs allot more effort

The animation lacked allot of movement and emotion and there were also limited sounds. The story plot was extremely basic and there were no twists and limited humor overall. I strongly recommend to pay more attention to your work and improve it. Good work will ALWAYS take time. Good luck in the future.

~ DEFF

keep trying

there was little tweening and was too short, keep trying.

Credits & Info

Views
3,689
Votes
3
Score
1.17 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 3, 2008
12:35 PM EST