i really did not understand what the whole thing was about, so it could use some work
Not Worth it
Well, for one it was slow (which is weird because it was also short).
In any case, if you're going to animate something so short and simple you should at LEAST animate very detailed and have better graphics. The NG tag isn't even something you made so you get no props for that.
Not bad, I guess.
The grafiti art saying 'NEWGROUNDS' looked great. Nice work on that. I think you should of gotten a better loop for audio, though. The loop kept jumping two seconds before it played again.
Try to also draw your own background and to make the animation smooth by speeding up the frame rate. (to something like 25 or 30)
Other than that, keep on working on flash. 4/10.
Are the pants on?
I dont feel this is the right place for this... try another website where people can download the fla