Wow
I r gon a by taht bok =D
Author Comments
This is our first flash project. I have never used flash before the night we threw this together in my garage sitting on a walmart futon. So please be constructive in your criticizing. There will be many more to come with our quality increasing each time(hopefully).
Please review. Thanks.
ps. Our website is under construction. At the moment we have a email posted there so you can leave input, comments or ideas. Thanks again and look for us in the future.
Um...no
Chuck Norris is a douchebag and so is Mike Huckabee. Regardless though, the flash wasn't that bad. Preloader, replay button, and some more work so it looks like you didn't just copy and paste images down, would have gave you a better score.
MyStaplerNews responds:
Thanks and look for our next one I hope we can exponentially grow from here on out.
Decent idea, interesting facts.
Next time try adding a preloader and replay buttons instead of a continuous loop. There are some great tutorials on newgrounds, as well as a preloader that you simply paste into the first frame of your movies.
MyStaplerNews responds:
Thank you for the advice and the vote.
Very funny.
It doesn't matter that you are new to Flash; the monologue was still amazing! You had a good point with the book too - that the author is making money from copying and pasting, lol.
MyStaplerNews responds:
Thank you very much. I did the vocals and I'm glad you like them.
Not bad
I wouldn't have looped it but I like how you presented the story.
MyStaplerNews responds:
Thank you. And we are working with our next one and will have a pre-loader.