Notbad

So this was a good submission i really like what you did here with the story and the visual animations is pretty good so nice flick here

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you big silly

Definitely a different movie than what I've seen from you thus far. It had an interesting storyline and interesting graphics as well. The camera changes were good throughout. I liked this one. One thing you need to work on is graphical depth, especially when you are working with this traced style. Sometimes things looked a little short when they were on angles and such.

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
An interesting style you have. Were the graphics scanned in from a piece of paper? It's kind of hard to tell. Nonetheless, they look rather unique.

^^Needs Improving^^
Storyline didn't make much sense to me. It doesn't sound like English is your first language, which would attribute to it being kind of hard to understand. I would get someone on the forums to proofread your next submission. Also, strange ending...are you planning on a sequel?

Needs more depth...

There's a decent core to this Flash, but buried behind a mountain of inadequacy.

The graphics consisist of five objects, two of which are the characters. The musical interjections were okay, but that's the only sound. In order for this piece to improve, it has to have more elements and more in depth. Also, the comic timing while not bad, needs to be sharpened.

This isn't that terrible of an idea, but the movie certainly looks, sounds, and plays like a bad Flash.

Great!

A pretty entertaining animtion! Good graphics, smooth movements and a good plot. I like the dark atmosphere, heh, keep up the good work! Is this a standalone "movie" or part of a series?

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