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Xilias 02

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Second episode .. hope you enjoy it ^_^

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hmm

me likey :D

Its getting better

i would like if you made episodes longer ther too short

High hopes, eh?

Quite frankly, I know what you're trying to do, and I'm all for it. I'm sayin', it's easy to watch, and I'm not even going to say anything about the voices, but what REALLY got me was the subtitles.
I'm thinking that Kratos, Kratus, and Kratoss are the same people, right? Also, punctuation makes a big difference, and what were Oden? Those big mushroom fella's?
Anyway, the flash seems to have a firm foundation. The music was nifty, and I know how it is with low-budget animation, so, I guess my advice is to spend slightly more time on everything: animation's smoothness, the effects (and trying to display them--I had no idea why people were turning into balls for), and maybe invest in a graphics tablet if you don't have one.
Keep it up, though. It looks like a very promising series.

good series

this is just like paladin. good series. It just needs voices. thats all.

Dialog,s music

You have a long way to go before submitting the episodes, here are my advices to get an awesomely awesome score:
1º Bigger dialogs, don't rush, you have plenty of time to show your overpowered character powers.
2º Voices, you really need to add voices in order to turn the flash video way more interesting.
3º Bigger episodes
4º Change the music, it's always the same
5º Add a better loading
6º Add a menu in the beggining
7º Some Pause, play, pause buttons would be cool :)

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