First year of flash, huh?

Heh, yeah, it's that obvious. Don't worry, by year 2, you'll understand why I gave this the lashing I did. But I'm not gonna diss you, just give you some pointers.
1. NEVER go voiceless. If your movies don't have voice actors, make silent movies and let the story tell itself until you get a microphone so you and your friends can voice act. Or check out the voice acting club in the forums
2. NEVER be without a buildup. Don't let your movie start out, "Why did you kill my father!"
3. Try to steer clear of cliches. I'm still suffering the consequences of a cliched story with my first series even 2 years later. I can tell that you didn't really write a direction for the story or anything if it started out completely open-ended like this. I can tell the whole story just from this one introduction.

Don't worry, you'll be fine, people seem to like it, and I did too. I hope I've helped you out in some way. I can see that by the end of this year, you'll be sweet at flash. I know it. Peace.

Hey

nice a bit short but to the point :D Nice music

alot of potential

As much as I love foreign films, my biggest gripe is subtitles, hence that is my first gripe here. As already stated, voices would improve this greatly.

As for the music score, I didnt mind it to much. Sound was good, but being such a dramatic intro, i would maybe change it up a bit.

Graphics and animation were fair. I'm sure if you took a bit more time, you could improve on them.

Storyline....now this you got me on. You start the tone just right by introducing, I'm guessing, the 2 main characters in obviously a very dramatic/hostile scenerio. So you instantly get peoples attention. From a writer standpoint, you have done one of the hardest things already, which is keeping people interested. Just make sure the following episodes support it =)

good job

I like the story off it it looks like its going to be great

good

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