The play button's stuck.

I liked it. My advice to you is to add detail. People dig the shiny stuff, know what I mean?

Sorry to say this but this could be much better.

I'm guessing you're new to flash so I won't write a harsh review or anything like that.

The preloader stayed up for a while after the flash has loaded so you may want to check what's happening with that.

I did think the background of the preloader was slightly clever. You used it within your animation and that's quite creative. The dragon wasn't badly animated for a new guy to flash either.

You may want to improve on your voice acting though. Here's a hint: Try not to get your mouth too close to the microphone. Have a bit of a distance so that it doesn't get static.

Keep working on flash, though. You'll improve in the future but for now, this just gets a 4/10 from me.

This is just awful.

Terrible animation no explosion this leaves alot to be desired.

Erm...

Errr...
First, the animation was awful.
I'm sorry but it was. The preloader stayed up for 3 seconds, and the storyline wasn't very original.
But i did like the dragon bit, he was animated quite well.

Keep trying...

CazmoV

good shorts

I liked the animation but the graphics was not good.most of the ime everything was great. And the dinosaur like thing was cool. Can you PM me how to draw that.