i agree with CruzAzul-19 you got potientional but here is what you can do in the next movie
1 longer music so no looping the song 3 times
2 i gave you a 4 so dont be sad
3 a little better on the windows paint animation
4 notify me when #2 comes out i want 2 see it
This was actually a pretty great flash, and the story of it was really really great. The music in this was a great touch, and this deserves a better score. Just work on making voices next time, and just better graphics. I see potential in you, and I think you should make this series. Practice makes perfect, and you could get a lot better if you do the series. STill great flash, and Happy New Year! :]
Well i tried to add voice but.... they could not be heard clearly
you need some more practise
mspaint or flashmx?
It looked like you made it on paint.
It was 100% tweens :(
But you st least tried which is more than 1/3 of newgrounds does.