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My first flash in 2008 :) WOOOOT!!!

I hope to make this a series depending on my score so.... vote high!


i agree

i agree with CruzAzul-19 you got potientional but here is what you can do in the next movie
1 longer music so no looping the song 3 times
2 i gave you a 4 so dont be sad
3 a little better on the windows paint animation
4 notify me when #2 comes out i want 2 see it

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This was actually a pretty great flash, and the story of it was really really great. The music in this was a great touch, and this deserves a better score. Just work on making voices next time, and just better graphics. I see potential in you, and I think you should make this series. Practice makes perfect, and you could get a lot better if you do the series. STill great flash, and Happy New Year! :]

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goldie12345 responds:

Well i tried to add voice but.... they could not be heard clearly

try harder

you need some more practise

mspaint or flashmx?

It looked like you made it on paint.


It was 100% tweens :(

But you st least tried which is more than 1/3 of newgrounds does.

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2.71 / 5.00

Jan 1, 2008
2:28 AM EST
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