Nice!
Looks like the birth of a great series! The graphics could be better, with more detail, shading, etc, but the plot is good. Keep working on it, looking forward to future pieces!
-cd-
Author Comments
Mitchell blows a piece of bubble gum, and things go zany!
-Hammer-Bro Productions
FPS: 24
Size: 720x486
Length: About 35 seconds
Pretty good.
It was aiight. I think you need to add a little more though. Really get in why his luck is bad.
Hammer-Bro responds:
You'll see soon that he gets physical damage in every episode.
Good but could be better
It was good but it needs some improvment, like you can see the clouds through Mitchell in one part, and the one building's windows were oddly placed. There also could be some more background, and lastly the space needle doesnt really look like that. If you fix these problems i think you have a pritty good flash here and keep going i'd like to see the other episodes
Hammer-Bro responds:
Don't worry, we will have much more episodes. Until the public hates it, I'm still here.
Alright.
I have to admit this, it actually was decent. I liked the style of it, and the story was alright. Even though the graphics could get better, and the animation too to make it a bit more precise. Anyways keep up th awsome work, and never stop making flash. :]
Hammer-Bro responds:
Don't worry, I won't. ;)
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