Not bad, but too short
Like you say, it's unfinished, but it looks like an interesting start - sort of madness meets the matrix. I hope you finish it.
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Have been working with this one for a while now.
Pretty proud of it.
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NOT FINISHED!
I havent added all sounds, and i have no song.
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what is happening here ?
What you have is good so far.
The animation is smooth, but you should really think about completing a piece of work before you submit it. Finish off including the sounds in your movie, perhaps add some more content, and include a soundtrack in the background. You can find plenty of free songs on the Newgrounds Audio Portal.
good start
great job for a begginner! i'm a newbie in flash myself!
REALLY GOOD, BUT...
Please don't half-ass this project,
FINISH IT, cuz there's true potential here.
It's a really good fan-flash with original ideas and good graphics (smooth).
Add in background music? (madness style of course)