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A decent first flash. The music went well with the simplicity of this, and honestly I felt it fit the color of the background if that makes sense. As far as comparing this to other similar movies, this was nothing special. You need to have more going on simultaneously rather than just one thing. Also, try to smooth out your drawings with the paintbrush a bit.

not the best but, it was random. I like random.

Random humor is something that can make something good. That's what made this movie so good.

:) Very Good!

You have spent time on this animation, but you have the same problem as me. Drawing the objects. Its hard as hell I know, but with your ability, if you focused on that, you could be one of the best on NG. Good luck!

Great job!

This was just awsome for being your first flash. I really see a future in you, and I know you will become a great artist. As for this flash, I loved the style of it, and I liked the different forms that appeared in this. Still keep up the awsome work,and hope to see some more from you! :]

You got potential!

Ive seen many artists post their first flashs that looked like there was no effort put into them. You, on the other hand, took your time and made a good flash. Great job! Keep working on your flash skills and I know you will make the front page eazy!